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Sherlock Fic: Famished

Fourth food-related drabble for drabbles20in20.



Famished

“Why am I on the couch? What are you doing?”

“Because you fainted. And wondering when you last ate.”

“Five days ago.”

“FIVE? Sherlock!”

“You didn’t remind me to eat.”

“I was in Cardiff. How did you survive before I reminded you of these things?”

“I remembered to eat and drink. Now that I am burdened with a flatmate with nothing better to do than to remind me, I can put my superior intellect to better use.”

“But I’m not always here.”

“You should be. “

“Besides… I do have better…”

“Really, John?”

“I should’ve left you on the floor.”

Comments

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sabrinaphynn
Apr. 13th, 2011 03:08 am (UTC)
he
perfect, just pitch perfect. I can hear them now.
Jenn, who now giggles every time her 6 year old tell her he's bored....
goldvermilion87
Apr. 13th, 2011 03:12 am (UTC)
Re: he
:-)

Glad you liked it!

And I giggle pretty much anyone says the word "BORED" Nowadays... so I'm with you. :-)

sabrinaphynn
Apr. 13th, 2011 04:09 am (UTC)
Re: he
It is scary the way my Harry says it ... I don't call him my little Mycroft for nothing...
goldvermilion87
Apr. 13th, 2011 09:40 am (UTC)
Re: he
HAHA! :-)
litlover12
Apr. 13th, 2011 01:06 pm (UTC)
Re: he
*giggle*
capt_facepalm
Apr. 13th, 2011 03:14 am (UTC)
Superior intellect, indeed!
goldvermilion87
Apr. 13th, 2011 03:16 am (UTC)
It's obvious from the fact that he said "why am I on the couch?" rather than "where am I?"
med_cat
Apr. 13th, 2011 04:02 am (UTC)
Ah yes, good update to Doyle's passing remark ;)
goldvermilion87
Apr. 13th, 2011 09:39 am (UTC)
:-)
gracious_anne
Apr. 13th, 2011 09:58 am (UTC)
"Should've left you on the floor." Oh, that's just great. I love this one.
goldvermilion87
Apr. 13th, 2011 09:59 am (UTC)
Thanks. :-)
morganstuart
Apr. 13th, 2011 10:33 am (UTC)
"Really, John?"

Ha! I love it.
goldvermilion87
Apr. 13th, 2011 10:40 am (UTC)
Haha! Why is Sherlock being a jerk SO ENTERTAINING!???

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. :-)
rabidsamfan
Apr. 13th, 2011 12:33 pm (UTC)
*howl of glee* Yes, the last line is perfect.
goldvermilion87
Apr. 13th, 2011 12:34 pm (UTC)
Hehe! Glad you liked it.

Maybe John learned his lesson for next time. :-P
litlover12
Apr. 13th, 2011 01:07 pm (UTC)
Perfection!
goldvermilion87
Apr. 13th, 2011 01:08 pm (UTC)
Thanks! :-)
red_chapel
Apr. 13th, 2011 02:47 pm (UTC)
Adoring this!
goldvermilion87
Apr. 13th, 2011 03:31 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Glad you like it. :-)
rojo3131
Apr. 29th, 2011 02:29 am (UTC)
Hey I was perusing through your 30 days meme of Sherlock (because I have the intention of starting one myself but I haven't read the entire Sherlock stories neither watched the Granada series or any other movies) and them I found these little drabbles. Lovely, I really like them but this is really really good, specially the last line! =)
goldvermilion87
Apr. 29th, 2011 02:40 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! Glad you've enjoyed them.

By the way, there is a Sherlock-specific 30 days thing that I almost did. Here is a link to the list, if you're interested:

http://goldvermilion87.livejournal.com/82127.html
hab318princess
May. 1st, 2011 11:50 am (UTC)
I can so see that happen.
goldvermilion87
May. 1st, 2011 12:53 pm (UTC)
Hehe! Yeah!
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